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Aidan McConrad; Ready to be looked at.
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Topic Started: Jul 6 2018, 11:26 PM (97 Views)
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rocksmasher
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Jul 6 2018, 11:26 PM
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| Name: Aidan McConrad Age: 21 Gender: Male Ethnicity: American Affiliation: Other Renown: None. Fame: None Infamy: None Bounty: None.
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The Character
Height: 170 Weight: 50kg Hair: Black Eyes: Blue
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General Appearance: Short and skinny man. Almost seems malnurished.
| Clothing: A black t-shirt, black pants
| Personality: Calm and collected
| Quote(s): "By fire be disgusted!" "Do not feed me spicy food or suffer the consequences!"
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History:
History: His parents learned of his powers at a young age. He scared the other children in his class when he drink fizzy drinks. He taught himself to belch on command, letting him utilize his quirk at will. Although it did make his stomach and chest hurt. He never got into an actual fight at school because he was so addicted to fizzy drinks, and he still is. His addiction however makes to so that he can never get too close to people, as he is scared to melt their faces off. He became very into anti-social due to the fact that everyone teases him about his weird quirk. Almost to the point that he thought about going towards villiany, but watching the heroes fight using their quirks inspired him to become fight for the little man. But only if he could do it, by simply scaring off someone. Now he is living in his rented room in Japan, hoping to do some good at some point. Although his fire belching needs to be trained.
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Combat, Stats & Earnings:
Combat: Slapping.
| Cash: 500
| Overall XP: 130
| Earned XP: 0
| Remaining XP: 0.
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| Speed: | Power: | Accuracy: | Stamina: | Control:
| 15 (E)
| 35 (D-)
| 35 (D-)
| 35 (D-)
| D
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Limit Pool: 25/25.
Enhancements and Quirks.
(For more info click here)
Enhancement points: 4 Enhancement Points Remaining: 4 Enhancements: None. Licenses: None. Quirk mastery's: N/A. Roleplay Earned Enhancements and Licenses: N/A.
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| Name | Tier | Description | Fire Belch.
| Tier 4
| description Ability: -The user can shoot fire from their mouth via burps. Only the burps release fire. The user should drink carbonated drinks to be able to use quirks efficiently. As the control rank increases, the fire becomes hotter and more powerful.
Limitations: - User must have frizzy drinks. Overuse of quirk causes -2 stat grade debuff in stamina for 2 turns. Holding in burps, causes smoke to rise out of the user's ears.
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Techniques
(For more on techniques see here)
Technique points: 40 Technique points spent: 5 Technique points remaining: 5
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Torch Belch T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10. Type: Offensive. Range: Short. Stats: No changes.
| Description: It allows him to use his fire belch as a blowtorch, forming his lips like if he were to whistle.
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StrongBadEmail
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Jul 8 2018, 08:35 PM
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- Your stats are very wrong, Control doesn't get exp put into it. It is averaged into a flat letter based on the grades of the other 4 stats (which do get exp put into them).
- 25 exp = E+, 35 exp = D-.
- You need to include a link to the roll for your quirk in the gains and losses table.
- The TP and LP cost for your technique is very wrong. Please read through the technique page for a better understanding of how techniques work.
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StrongBadEmail
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Yesterday, 6:45 AM
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You should have 10 exp remaining, not 5. Other than that looks good. 1/2
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Prophet Misfit
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Yesterday, 8:59 AM
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2/2 Will move once you make the edit to remaining exp
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rocksmasher
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Yesterday, 7:53 PM
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It is now ready to be moved.
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