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Wave Furiko; ready for review
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Topic Started: May 24 2018, 07:06 AM (135 Views)
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Platnum
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May 24 2018, 07:06 AM
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| Name: Wave Furiko Age: 18 Gender: Male Ethnicity:Filipino Affiliation:other Renown:0 Fame:0 Infamy:0 Bounty:0 |
The Character
Height:180 Weight:75 Hair: Dark blue Eyes: Dark blue
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General Appearance: Wave is a fairly muscular young man of above average height with short dark blue hair and eyes. He also has a noticeable cowlick in the front of his head.
| Clothing: He wears a blue leather jacket and a red scarf with an anchor on it. Under that is a white shirt with a single blue line down the middle. He also wears a pair of grey jeans with a belt and dark blue boots.
| Personality: Wave is a true navy man at heart and loves everything to do with the ocean. He could be level-headed and easy-going in normal situation but rather the opposite in an abnormal one. Has a playful and morbid sense of humour and would often make light of serious situations while sporting a mischievous grin.
Wave believes to live freely no matter what rules surround him. Though If he finds them tolerable, he would tolerate. If he finds it too obnoxious, he would break them. And also that every person alone is morally responsible for their action.
| Quote(s): Wet! Just ride with the waves. What's the current situation?
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History:
History: Born on a political family in the Philippines. Wave escapes from his family's political ambition for the pursuit on the thrill of adventure. He escaped the country by being a stowaway on one of the international vessel that docked their. From that point on, he had been on various countries by just being a stowaway whenever he has finished exploring the place. Often stealing money to the ships he hops into.
His goal for now is to have a ship and friends/family to have adventure with. After that is to explore the Dark Continent. And lastly, to explore the unknowns of the world.
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Combat, Stats & Earnings:
Combat: Wave loves to fight, favouring the use of brute strength and melee fighting in battle. Quite sadistic and vicious when in battle. Despite of this aggressive nature, Wave is very perceptive and keen mind in battle,trying to deduce the basics behind an opponent's attack and react to any potential danger he is aware of.
| Cash: 500
| Overall XP:130
| Earned XP:0
| Remaining XP:0
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| Speed: | Power: | Accuracy: | Stamina: | Control:
| 35 d-
| 35 d-
| 25 e+
| 35 d-
| D
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(For more info on stats click here)
Limit Pool:25
Enhancements and Quirks.
Enhancement points:4 Enhancement Points Remaining: 2 Enhancements:(Write down your enhancements and their full descriptions here) Licenses:(Write down any licenses you own and their full description) Quirk mastery's:
| Surf | 2 | Wave is a master of the sea, he is able to surf on it without any use of surfing board. When moving in the water, he could free form surf himself when above water or able to swim fast underwater, increasing his speed by 2.
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| Name | Tier | Description | Hydrokenisis
| 3
| description Ability: - The user of this quirk has the ability to manipulate water using their mind if they themselves are in contact with said body of water.
Limitations: -Concentration is require to uphold the usage of this quirk in any of its forms. They must use 'conducting' hand movements to control the water they wish to manipulate. They have to be in contact with the water in some way. Cannot manipulate all forms of liquid, has to be the good ol' H2O.When the user goes over the limit, the user of this quirk suffers a -3 stat grade debuff in Speed for 1 post.
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Techniques
(For more on techniques see here)
Technique points: 40 Technique points spent: 40 Technique points remaining: 0
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Name Water whiplash T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: offensive Range: short Stats: none
| Description: wave creates a lashing tendril of water to swipe at an opponent or use it on multiple purposes.
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Name Water Bullet T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: offensive Range: short Stats: none
| Description: controls a medium amount of water and sends it in a forceful blow towards their target.
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Name water jet T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: material breaker Range: short Stats: none
| Description: Wave can make the water flow to the opponent like a high pressure jet, forcing the opponent back. It could also blast or break any material it makes contact into. By spending 20 LP this technique may break up to D rank materials.
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Name water cloak T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: Armor Range: melee Stats: stam and fire resistance +1
| Description: Wave can use the water as a form of armour like cloak with tentacle-like arms to himself. Increasing his stamina and fire resistance by one. Need to spend half of the initial limit cost per post to maintain the armour.
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Name Water wall T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: defense Range: short Stats: none
| Description: Wave moulds a water into a a wall or a shield and can be used to deflect or block an attack. The wall is capable of defending against d rank or weaker attacks. |
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Name Big enough wave T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: offensive Range: AoE 2m rads Stats: none
| Description: By moving a large mass of water without separating it from its original source, Furiko could create a big wave to hit an area. Damaging anyone around it. |
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Name Crashing punch T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 5 Type: physical Range: melee Stats: none
| Description: Wave throws out an all out haymaker punch to the opponent's head. |
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Name Sucker kick T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 5 Type: physical Range: melee Stats: none
| Description: Wave quickly makes a Front Snapping Kick to the opponent's mid section of the body. |
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Edited by Platnum, Jul 2 2018, 06:33 AM.
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Platnum
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May 24 2018, 07:12 AM
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May 28 2018, 11:04 PM
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fix the links in your gains and losses table, quirk roll and EP purchases should each have their own row
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Queen Harmonia
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May 29 2018, 07:50 PM
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Your technique ranges are all incorrect. You cannot reach Medium or Long until C-Rank or B-Rank respectively. All technique ranges are Short, the D-Rank Range, which is 5m for a standard tech, and 2m in an AoE.
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Jul 2 2018, 12:04 AM
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Your punch and kick techs only cost 5 LP since they’re physical techs that don’t use your quirk.
Fix that and 1/2
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Jul 5 2018, 07:42 AM
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