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Greato David
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Topic Started: May 24 2018, 05:39 AM (203 Views)
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Jordan Gantz
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May 24 2018, 05:39 AM
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| Name:Greato David Age:17 Gender:Male Ethnicity: America - Caucasian Affiliation: Other Renown: Fame:0 Infamy:0 Bounty:
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The Character
Height:6'7 Weight:270 Hair:Black Eyes:Pure white
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General Appearance: His is a very skinny man with that somewhat muscular build to him. His skin is pale white and his eyes are as white as his skin with all white pupils. Wearing a cloak and mask to his many scars and cuts that cover his entire body. His body is more snake-like then human to make him faster.
| Clothing: Greato's his body appears to be composed almost entirely from dark rags which he can move and manipulate with great mobility and fluidity. His mask is signature look to him since he began to drifter from city to city. Much of his face was heavily scar to the point he covered his face so he wouldn't scare people.
| Personality: Greato despite his strange appearance is a very polite and happy fellow. Though very soft spoken is does whatever sam tells him to. Despite not wanting to be a hero he isn't willing to kill unless it's king peter. He has moments of being pessimistic about a fight he isn't winning or an order he failed to do. He loves eating scrape metal and other shiny items which are treats to him. When faced with threats he is strangely nice to them and genuinely worries for their safety. Is this a way to creep out his enemy or does he care about his fellow human beings no one really knows?
| Quote(s):"I am really hungry can we find a nice stop sign to eat"
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History:
History: Greato was a drifter who couldn't find a good home in the city. Finding a bunker which he thought was abandoned and made himself at home.Often living in the old parts of the bunker eating everything metal that he could. Watching the kids as a sudden leader made his way out of the bunch. King Peter seemingly taking over the group with ease. He and greato butted heads since the beginning because he would eat most of the metal to make weapons.
Being deemed an outcast by king Peter and lived in the near fringe of the group. Despite being the oldest of the group of kids whom he could've outright beat up. Choosing to keep to himself and eat all the scrapes and junk they didn't need. The king peter often tried to bully him but greato just ignored his attempts to told him to piss off somewhere. A few of his right-hand men had tried to fight him but he ended severely searing their flesh with the metal he spits at them. The rising tension between him and king Peter reached the breaking point when he began to abuse sam peacemaker after hearing about a quirk episode she had.
Someone had been spying on sam when she began digging the hole to escape. Catching the boy as he passed his camp and forced him to tell him what he saw. Confessing to him that he saw Sam doing and was going to tell king peter. He knew his chances to finally finding a way out of the bunker but he didn't want to leave without dealing with king peter first. He began a one-man assault on his makeshift castle which didn't have too many guards. Confronting king Peter about the way he ruled and how he treated people. King Peter and greato fought with greato defeating and spraying molten metal on his face. Making his escape eating threw ice with ease and caught up with sam and agreed to be her bodyguard.
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Combat, Stats & Earnings:
Combat: David utilities his quirk in both offense and defense ways to fit his needs. He is not above eating limbs or spraying them in molten metal to pacify them. He isn't above killing but he does prefer to leave them in a state to which they are easily detainable or can be taken by another hero.
| Cash: 500
| Overall XP:130
| Earned XP:0
| Remaining XP:0
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| Speed: | Power: | Accuracy: | Stamina: | Control:
| D-[35]
| E-[25]
| D-[35]
| D-[35]
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Limit Pool:25
Enhancements and Quirks.
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Enhancement points:4 Enhancement Points Remaining: 3 Enhancements: Licenses: Quirk mastery's: Master of Control: Elite 1 EP Ability: Thanks to endless training, you have become a Master of your own Quirk. You are now capable of breaking material one rank higher. (D Rank Elite can break D Rank Materials, but this does NOT mean that paying double the Limit Cost for a D Rank Elite will allow you to break C Rank Materials.)
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| Name | Tier | Description | Molten Core
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| description Ability:- his quirk makes the user's digestive system designed to allow them to eat anything. The user's teeth are hard, metallic-like and sharp and the esophagus is resistant to pressure and heat and basically made of a hard to melt substance. The user's stomach is pressurized and similar to a furnace heating things up to molten temperatures and the stomach acids are viscous and acidic enough to break down anything they can fit into their mouth. Anything that the user spits or throws up becomes molten-like materials. In addition, the user's body uses everything they eat to reinforce itself becoming harder and resistant to heat and pressure, thus preventing the user from being affected by their own quirk.
TL;DR - The user can consume and digest any substance without injury and then spit out the contents in molten pressurized form if it's a solid or liquid.
Limitations: Despite the versatility and both offensive and defensive usages of this quirk it does have a couple of downsides. First, Considering this quirk is always active, the user has an abnormally fast metabolism. As such, they have to consume and eat at much higher quantities and rates than most others. If trapped in an area where the user cannot eat/drink anything for long periods of time, then the user will become sluggish, tired and ultimately will respond much slower to all incoming stimuli. In addition, this quirk is very much like a water gun in terms of how it operates an as such without the ability to consume anything, this quirk effectively cannot be employed offensively.
Limitations: -Limit Break: On the other side of the spectrum if the user eats too much or keeps spitting up molten materials despite being at their limit then just like anyone else, their pressurized stomach will still have a bad stomach ache and will cause discomfort and pain for the user. (Speed -2)
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Techniques
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Technique points: 40 Technique points spent:25 Technique points remaining:15
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Liquid Metal Spary (D) T.P Cost:5 Limit Cost: 1O Type: Debuff, Blast Range: Short Stats: -2 stamina
| Description: Greato eats a nearby metal then throws it up in a hot liquid form. Severely burning and searing the flesh with the molten stream of the metal molten mix. |
Need to bite to eat (D) T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: Type: material breaker Range: Short Stats:
| Description: Takes two wide bites out of an item and shallows allowing him to digest the item in question. |
Eh It will do (D) T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost:10 Type: defensive. Range: Short Stats:
| Description: Seeing an enemy attack him by any means drives him to eat whatever is coming at him. Opening his mouth wide catching the attack then proceeds to eat it. Can be used to block an attack of the same rank. |
Molten Spary (D) T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: offensive, Range: Short Stats:
| Description: Opening his mouth as throws up a mouth sized ball of metal and flings it at his enemy. |
Ravenous Bite (D) T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: offensive, Range: Melee Stats:
| Description: Dodging an incoming and getting low to the ground and leaping into the air above his opponent. Coming down on the enemy with his weight and biting down as hard as he can. His mask splitting apart and showing a row of sharp metallic teeth. His tongue is long and covered in a hot bright orange making the bite that much more painful.
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Jordan Gantz
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May 24 2018, 06:48 AM
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Queen Harmonia
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May 29 2018, 08:00 PM
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Your quirk roll information is incorrectly filled out in your Gains/ Losses table. The link and information needs to be filled out in the row above the one where you've inputted incomplete info, where the parentheses are located.
And just a quick question... how are you able to spray acid at people without an acidic quirk? If I read Molten Core correctly, the quirk employs heat and fire and well... a molten core, not something acidic. Either edit the techniques where you mention acid, or remove them.
All of your techniques still have writings that are there to help you make them. i.e. You haven't deleted any of the surplus information about stat buffs or debuffs when the technique doesn't have anything to do with that. Go through and remove that stuff, please.
Also, genetic modification and human experiments are a big plot no-no. Please amend your history to remove that aspect.
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Jordan Gantz
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May 30 2018, 02:32 AM
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Fixed everything and ready for approval
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Jun 3 2018, 02:05 AM
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Acid Spary: Why is the range listed as long? It's D rank Ravenous Bite : This is a quirk tech, it should have a Limit Cost of 10
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Jordan Gantz
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Jun 3 2018, 02:29 AM
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Queen Harmonia
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Jun 3 2018, 09:42 PM
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Liquid Metal Spray ; This is listed as an offensive attack when it is in fact a debuff. It needs to be an attack, OR a debuff. Pick one.
Nom Nom Nom ; A Material Breaker technique is moreso... breaking something that isn't being physically eaten. So, taking a bite of out something, perhaps. Unless you just want to use it as a material break in the sense that the material breaks down in his stomach.
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Jordan Gantz
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Jun 4 2018, 03:06 AM
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Jul 2 2018, 12:25 AM
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where are you getting the material to shoot for Molten Spray?
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Yesterday, 4:05 PM
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Who the hell is King Peter?
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