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Ring Toss; New Quirk
Topic Started: Feb 10 2018, 08:37 PM (269 Views)
MuffledGarbage
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Ring-Toss

Ability: -
The user was born with a detachable organ within the abdomen. The user is able to reach into the middle of their chest to pull out up to 3 rings. These rings float above the ground at 2.5Ft and gravitate towards other rings up to a rate depending on the user's level of control.
more rings = more speed.
The user can increase the acceleration of rings by physically touching one of the rings.


E: Rings can gravitate up to 5 MPH
D: Rings can gravitate up to 10 MPH
C: Rings can gravitate up to 15 MPH and the user can slowdown rings too!
B: Rings can gravitate up to 20 MPH and the user has better control of Ring speed
A: Rings can gravitate up to 25 MPH and the user can evaporate the rings

Limitations: -
Due to the Rings being a functioning organ within the user's body, if the user goes past their limit, they will cough up blood and suffer a -3 debuff to all stats for two posts.

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Edited by MuffledGarbage, Feb 16 2018, 05:48 PM.
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Aptissimi
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Best Ex-Glowboi
Condense this
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MuffledGarbage
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I condensed that mess of words I had down to what needs to be said.

If there's anything else I need to change just let me know and I'll get right on it!!

Thank you for your time :D
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Remove the part in limitations about LP cost and restoration. LP costs are determined by technique rank and LP cannot be restored by any means other than standard post based regeneration (20% per post). This quirk also needs a limit breaker
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You have until the 18th to make edits or it's getting denied.
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MuffledGarbage
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I made the change about LP limitations and added a limit breaker(at least I think I did, unless the limit breaker is like FF7 limit break or something)

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Mutation tier 3
1/2
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Honk.
It's probably best to remove the table. The majority of these things, such as a technique's speed, is already assumed to be equal to the character's control. That speed is already either equal to, or fast than the speeds you have listed. Stating that they can slow down and evaporate the rings at C & A Rank are nice ways to show progression, but this can be reflected in a sentence rather than needing a full table.
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