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Broken Mirror
Topic Started: Feb 6 2018, 01:07 PM (297 Views)
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Broken Mirror

Ability: - This Quirk's enables its wielder to harden and consequently shatter their body through muscle contraction. The resulting shards that cover the user's body can be used as tools, such as throwing knives. Other utility is entirely dependent on the user's creativity. Additionally, the user's body transforms all produced substances such as tears or spit into shards. The shards can be regenerated over time, or be instantly regained by manually letting the Quirk reassemble itself.

tl;dr aka Present Mic summary: Can shatter own body into deadly shards!

Limitations: - If the user's body takes too much damage, individual shards my shatter to too great a degree, resulting in severe physical damage. It is advised to not shatter one's body further than two layers, as deeper shattering may cause internal damage. Prolonged use of this Quirk can lead to becoming scatterbrained, making focusing on the task at hand difficult. If going over the limit, the Quirk's shattering takes too great a toll on the user's body and causes a -2 debuff to stamina and a -1 to power and accuracy for 2 posts.
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Inspired by JoJo's Ticket to Ride Stand.
Edited by Sunbather, Feb 6 2018, 11:25 PM.
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So you turn bits of your body into glass and then shatter them to throw them at enemies. But unless you put in the effort to go and collect all that glass back you can't properly reform or you'll just shatter your body to bits.

Huh.

Seems like it'd be tedious to go and collect all those glass pieces. Additionally I don't understand how the initial shattering can make your body slash resistant?

On the Limitations the debuffs for going overlimit need a post duration.

This whole quirk seems a bit too wordy for my tastes, I read a lot but still have only a rough idea of the quirk. (Mostly in the limitations section). Try condensing it a bit.
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Feb 6 2018, 07:30 PM
So you turn bits of your body into glass and then shatter them to throw them at enemies. But unless you put in the effort to go and collect all that glass back you can't properly reform or you'll just shatter your body to bits.

Huh.

Seems like it'd be tedious to go and collect all those glass pieces. Additionally I don't understand how the initial shattering can make your body slash resistant?

On the Limitations the debuffs for going overlimit need a post duration.

This whole quirk seems a bit too wordy for my tastes, I read a lot but still have only a rough idea of the quirk. (Mostly in the limitations section). Try condensing it a bit.
Removed/reworded things that came across differently from what I imagined, and condensed and simplified the overall description. Also added the post duration. I hope this is better! :) Quick elaboration on the resistance: My thought was a strike that cleanly cuts a shard would only really limit the size of a shard, rather than inflict structural damage like a blunt hit would. I can remove that though if it seems illogical?
Edited by Sunbather, Feb 6 2018, 07:53 PM.
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Hmm, once shattered would the skin under still be hardened or would it have to remain soft to properly move?

I read it mostly as being resistant to being slashed to their own shards. I'd like it better if you were not immune to be slashed by your own shards but it is not without some reason.

If you are going to keep the slash resistance assign a stamina buff towards it. Such as +X stamina vs Slashing attacks.
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It's basically like a top texture/layer. So if you harden and shatter your skin, the flesh below would still be normal and exposed to damage, if you tear off your shards or something somehow gets below them. You could then harden and shatter the layer below that and utilize it though, but from there on out it gets progressively more dangerous to utilize it, as you're so exposed to damage from there on out, so waiting a bit to restore "layers" is best.

However, I removed the slashing resistance entirely. The idea behind it was mostly for aesthetic, which can still be achieved through free form, and this makes the Quirk a lot easier overall, I think.

Just give me a shout if anything else needs changing. :)
Edited by Sunbather, Feb 6 2018, 11:27 PM.
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T-3 Body Manipulation *

*another staffer my change this
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The wording of this feels super vague. Is the entire body able to be changed into shards or just the skin and any body secretions? Is the skin itself still fine and it's just a top dermal layer converting?
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Feb 12 2018, 11:16 AM
The wording of this feels super vague. Is the entire body able to be changed into shards or just the skin and any body secretions? Is the skin itself still fine and it's just a top dermal layer converting?
The entire body can be changed but, as put in the drawbacks, if you go too deep it can lead to internal damage.
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"The shards can be regenerated over time, or be instantly regained by manually letting the Quirk reassemble itself."
How much time is needed for shard regeneration? How does letting the quirk reassemble itself work?
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