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Aspen Luong; It's a Trap!
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Topic Started: Nov 5 2017, 02:58 PM (390 Views)
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Riamz
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Nov 5 2017, 02:58 PM
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| Name: Aspen Luong Age: 14 Gender: Male Ethnicity: America (Asian descent) Affiliation: Other Renown: 0 Fame: 0 Infamy: 0 Bounty: 0
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The Character
Height: 152.4 cm (167.4) with quirk Weight: 167.4 Hair: Long black usually fashioned into a loose ponytail or some kind of house wife do harnessed with scrunchies or flower styled paraphernalia. Eyes: Darkish brown almost black.
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General Appearance: girlish and feminine looking dude of small and loose limbed stature. always hygienically clean however sometimes messy with his appearance.
| Clothing: Aspen likes male androgynous fashion and usually wears whatever comes out of his Mums closet which is usually has cardigans, button upped blouses few shawls and house wifey clothes. Aspen requires glasses but usually opts for contact lenses. a super hero suit would be similar to his circus outfit but with a mask.
| Personality:]Aspen is generally soft spoken and gentle when talking and likes to convey an image patience and understanding this has created an easy to display facade-ed smile and secretly like to judges others naivety with their own naive guise. Aspen likes to encourage “individuality” supporting most outcries of self image made by other player and likes to get along with other characters however this doesn't stop him from calling out people on their bullshit and breaking character making quite the closeted savage. Aspen navigates their life unsystematically and slowly making him naturally clumsy when rushed and suffers from minor disorganization dilemmas e.g losing paperwork within paperwork otherwise things are kept clean and his upbringing has created some sense of priorities. Aspen’s ideal is to do a good deed a day!
| Quote(s):”you do you…….” , "boy" and “that’s great sweetie……..”
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History:
History:Aspen was born in LA by two rich and neglectful parents. Aspen by necessity learned to cook and sew his parents not allowing him to buy anything that’s was deemed superficial. His parents believed that it would help Aspen to learn the value of money, this really just forced Aspen to practice housekeeping skills and only income being for sewing and food/cooking and gets the choice of one weekend activity which for Aspen is circus.
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Combat, Stats & Earnings:
Combat: Aspen had been enjoying weekend pilates for eons and has gained quite the flexibility taking it to the next level studying contortionism with the local circus and has become quite a slippery opponent when challenged being speedy and flexible while trying to keep things within arms reach, something difficult or easily detrimental due to his tiny size.
| Cash: 500
| Overall XP:130
| Earned XP:0
| Remaining XP:0
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| Speed: | Power: | Accuracy: | Stamina: | Control:
| (-D) 35
| (D-) 35
| (D-) 35
| (E+) 25
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(For more info on stats click here)
Limit Pool: 20
Enhancements and Quirks.
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Enhancement points: 4 EP Enhancement Points Remaining: 2 Enhancements:| Custom EP |
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| EP Name | EP Cost | Enhancement Description | | bladed Quirk | 2 | Aspen's Heels have evolved into strong blades Ability: +1 stat grade in speed when using a quirk technique. |
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| Name | Tier | Description | High Heels
| 5
| description Ability: - The user of this quirk is born with raised heels by 6 in (15 cm). Limitations: - If the user of this quirk exceeds their limit then they break a heel, causing a -1 stat grade debuff in speed for one post.
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Techniques
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Technique points: 40 Technique points spent: 15 Technique points remaining: 25
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Backwards Slash D T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: Offensive Range: Melee Stats: 0
| Description: Aspen does a tumble backwards protruding his heels as much as possible doing damage and moving out of melee range.
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| Technique 2 |
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"Just Spin With it" D T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: Offensive Range: N/A Stats: +1 Stamina +1 power -1 Accuracy
| Description: Aspen leans back on one heel making it the point of pivot, he takes the blow absorbing some of the inertia giving him the +1 Stamina which is the absorption of the impact Aspen then uses the inertia from the blow to add power into a backwards swipe i.e kick or punch this works similar to a sort of like a "sling shot" however using the technique hinders the accuracy of the strike greatly while another drawback is that Aspen must take damage for this to work otherwise nothing happens included if they are not within melee range Aspen does not do any damage however still gets the +1 stam.
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Bladed Kick D T.P Cost: 5 Limit Cost: 10 Type: Offensive Range: Melee Stats: 0
| Description: A very straight forward skill Aspen kicks with his quirk aiming for a slash or a stab somewhere on the opponents body also a very bad way to get a hair cut.
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Edited by Riamz, Nov 12 2017, 12:17 AM.
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Riamz
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Nov 11 2017, 12:58 PM
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MyuQQ
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Nov 11 2017, 05:26 PM
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Hello! I'm Myu. I will be grading you today.
Appearance: Good!
Clothing: Good!
Personality: Good!
Quotes: Good!
History: Good!
Combat: Good!
Techniques: Uh oh! So, your technique "Just spin with it" has three different buff going on. That's a no-no! D-Rank techs can either have a +2 stat buff to a single stat or a +1 buff to two different statistics. A drawback is unnecessary even if you'd like to add one, the upper limit of how many statistics you can buff is only two as a D-Rank tech.
If you can update this to reflect only two stats being buffed, that would be great!
Uh oh! So minor issue, melee techniques in general have a lower Limit Cost than other techniques. For "Backwards Slash" & "Bladed Kick" please reflect the Limit Cost for melee techniques in these two techniques as reflected here:
I'm Mr.Meseeks, look at me!
I can fix that if you like~

Bank: Good!
Please make these changes and then Bump your thread!
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Riamz
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Nov 12 2017, 12:34 AM
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bump! I changed the stats for just spin with it however backward slash and bladed kick both use my quirk as the source of damage (my heel being my quirk) and I would like to you to revise your decision please! other than that I'm good to go!
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MyuQQ
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Nov 13 2017, 05:02 PM
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Appearance: Good!
Clothing: Good!
Personality: Good!
Quotes: Good!
History: Good!
Combat: Good!
Techniques: Good! However, putting a note here. Riamz requested that her physical melee attacks were quirk-based and as such are susceptible to 10 Points, not 5.
Bank: Good!

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Edited by MyuQQ, Nov 13 2017, 05:06 PM.
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Aqua
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Nov 15 2017, 12:58 PM
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All checks out 2/2
Edited by Aqua, Nov 15 2017, 12:58 PM.
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