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B. Rainer; Ready
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Topic Started: Oct 1 2017, 08:58 PM (1,583 Views)
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Van
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Oct 1 2017, 08:58 PM
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 | 🎇 B. Rainer 🎇
🎇 Age: 18 🎇 Gender: Male 🎇 Ethnicity: Caucasian 🎇 Affiliation: Bounty Hunter 🎇 Office: Vitality 🎇 Cash: 6550
Renown 🎇 Renown:27 🎇 Fame: 12 🎇 Infamy: 15
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🎇 Big Smoke 🎇
🎇 Height: 6"2 🎇 Weight: 200 🎇 Hair: Moderately long, straight hair, dark brown 🎇 Eyes: Jet black 🎇 Licenses: Pro-Hero
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🎇 General Appearance 🎇
Rainer stands at just about 6"2 with a stocky frame. When wearing lighter and more form-fitting clothes - generally at home or when relaxed - one could see some definition in his muscles. He isn't particularly shredded, favouring practicality and strength over aesthetics, but he isn't so bulky as to limit movement. He generally wears a dark trench-coat and gloves, because detectives from Film Noirs are cool. Also there's plenty of pockets to store items in, but mostly it's because cool.
| 🎇 Clothing 🎇
Rainer generally wears a white or black tee, long-sleeved if the weather is cold, under a black/brown trenchcoat. He wears simple long black or brown pants. If its relatively windy or cold, he’ll also put on gloves.
| 🎇 Personality 🎇
Rainer is a laid back guy, living day to day by whatever means. His profession is that of a bounty hunter, a fitting job for the man, although due to various circumstances he became a hero. Despite this, his overall motives remain the same. The freedom granted by being a bounty hunter is something that Rainer values greatly, enjoying travelling all over the world and hunting down wanted persons. He doesn't adhere to a strict guideline of justice and purity, but does work with the 'good guys' rather than the 'bad guys', regardless of whether or not he himself is a criminal. Morally he can come off as cold, especially given that his job requires inflicting harm on others and sometimes, either indirectly or directly, killing. But this doesn't fully define him, and at heart he's a kind guy who would help others in need, granted that they weren't wanted criminals with bounties on their heads.
| 🎇 Quotes 🎇
"All this smoking's gonna get me killed one day." |
🎇 History 🎇
Raised as an orphan in a slum near the edge of New York, at the time, he and many others thought he was quirk-less, and to get through his younger years, he had to prove himself with only his body. He thirsted to escape his situation and live the good life, but school wasn't going to take him anywhere, left with nowhere else to turn to, he finally found hope when he smoked for the first time and discovered his quirk. After he turned 13 he used his quirk to rob some local thugs and high tailed it out the area. Travelling the country, a teen vagabond searching for meaning, he went state to state, observing peaceful rural, to bustling urban centres and impoverished slums. During his journeys he picked up various skills, and learned how to fight with nothing but his fists and his pipe. After 3 years of journeying around and working various odd jobs, he decided on his path in life. Taking a plane to Japan in order to pursue a career which involved fighting and quirks, whether it be a hero or a bounty hunter, he knew this was what he wanted to do. He also brought along some goat guy named Pann. Pann for various reasons is loyal to Rainer and also left home to travel like him.
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🎇 Combat, Stats, and Earnings 🎇
| Combat: Rainer is calm and reserved, and plays fights slowly and patiently. Tempered on his travels, he pays attention to areas upon entry, seeing quick ways out and vantage points. Acclimated to combat in areas with lots of obstructions, such as alleyways in densely packed slums, he uses smoke to deceive others and his spatial awareness to sneak up on then, on the other hand he isn't particularly fast and as such prefers to hold his ground and have others come to him rather than to sneak around too much. |
🎇 Overall XP: 625 (130 + 495)
| 🎇 Earned XP: 495
| 🎇 Remaining XP: 25
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| 🎇 Stats 🎇 |
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| Speed | Power | Accuracy | Stamina | Control
| (C-) 110
| (C) 145
| (C-) 110
| (B-) 235
| C
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Limit Pool: 45
🎇 Enhancements and Quirk 🎇
🎇 Enhancement points: 10EP
| 🎇 Enhancement Points Remaining: 3EP
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| Enhancments |
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| EP Name | Cost | Description |
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Enenra
| 5EP
| After developing the ability to morph his limbs into smoke, Rainer continued to use and strengthen this newfound power in many fights and a war. As he did, his mastery over it and understanding of this ability continued to grow, growing more and more reliant on it. This finally reached a tipping point, Rainer's body enduring a change that altered his entire quirk.
- Rainer can now perform a full-body transformation into a being of smoke, and no less.
- In this form, his limbs gain the ability to grow/extend, reaching only up to D rank range.
- Transforming into a body of billowing dense smoke, stamina and power buffs on transformation are stronger. Rainer gains +1 extra stat grade buffs for each new letter grade reached of the respective stat, starting at C rank and capping after reaching A rank.
- In smoke form, Rainer obtains the ability to spew out endless smoke from his mouth like a dragon breathing fire. This smoke is completely uncontrollable by his quirk and can only be shot out in a straight torrent.
These newfound abilities did not come without sacrifices though.
- Honing this smoke transformation deeply, Rainer has become dependent on it and is completely unable to use any quirk techniques outside of it.
- Able to enhance his physical abilities in this form, Rainer's body is now put under more strain than ever before. When breaking his limit, Rainer now endures a -3 stat grade Power and Stamina debuff in total.
- Rainer is now unable to control any smoke at all, even while in smoke form.
| | I Must Proceed At A High Velocity | 2EP | In developing his transformation further, Rainer has found that although his firepower is high; he is lacking in mobility. Aiming to amend this, his transformation is moving towards a change.
At B rank control: Rainer will gain a +1 stat buff to speed for each stat buff caused by his Enenra EP. Rainer can no longer increase his physical stat cap for speed and this cannot be EP'd out of—bar removing this EP. In limit breaking he now also suffers a -2 to speed for 2 posts.
Requires: Enenra
| | The Shōnen Protagonist | 0 | This EP enables it's user to go on missions, of C-Rank Level, to steal the item known as Reggie's Gratitude. It's an invasion on a character (user) who has it. The item is easily destroyed and can't not be repaired.
I AM THE MAIN CHARACTER!: After being dealt a fatal blow, if the item isn't destroyed yet and still on the users person, the item turns to dust as their wound is reversed, healed or in other words, fixed to allow them to fight again.
| | Physical Torment | 0 | After pushing his body pass it's limits and staring death in the face the user is capable of achieving one letter grade higher stamina cap.
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Enenra currently grants: +1 Power, +2 Stamina
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| Name | Tier | Description | Smoker's Delight
| Tier 3
| Description
Ability: - The user of this Quirk is able to give shape and form to and basically manipulate any smoke they exhale from their body. Depending on the user's whim, the smoke can be used to obscure something or someone or even create creatures from it. They are able to make the smoke more diaphanous or as strong as steel.
Limitations: - The user is unable to create smoke themselves, so they must first inhale it from any source in order to use it. This can cause long term life problems such as lung cancer and other health problems caused by smoking. Overuse of this quirk causes uncontrollable coughing and the user a -2 stat grade Stamina debuff for two posts.
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🎇 Techniques 🎇
Technique points: 70 Technique points spent: 40 Technique points remaining: 30
| Smoker's Delight Techniques |
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Smoke Blast (C Rank) T.P Cost: 10TP Limit Cost: 15LP Type: Offensive Range: Medium
| Description: Rainer spews out a large mass of smoke from his mouth, shooting this powerful blast of smoke up to 15 meters in front of him.
| Smoke Punch (D) T.P Cost: 5TP Limit Cost: 5LP Type: Physical Attack Range: Melee
| Description: Rainer exhales smoke he inhaled earlier while yelling "Smoke Punch" as he lunges forward and throws a straight punch at the opponent's jaw. The smoke and yelling is just a distraction which he uses to throw opponents off. More often that not it doesn't do anything at all and just amuses him.
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| Enenra Techniques |
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Baptized in Smoke (C Rank) T.P Cost: 10TP Limit Cost: 15LP; 8LP upkeep Type: Buff Range: Self Stats: +1 Stamina, +2 Power + Extra buffs from Enenra EP
| Description: Rainer transforms into Enenra form, body transforming into a mass of billowing dense smoke and gaining new abilities.
| Might of Smoke (D Rank) T.P Cost: 5TP Limit Cost: 10LP; 5LP upkeep Type: Buff Range: Self Stats: +2 Power + Extra buffs from Enenra EP
| Description: Rainer transforms into Enenra form, body transforming into a mass of billowing dense smoke and gaining new abilities.
| The Seraphim's Wrath T.P Cost: 10TP Limit Cost: 15TP; 8LP upkeep Type: Buff Range: Self Stats: +3 Power
| Description: In Enenra form, Rainer's 'muscles' enlarge slightly and condense to pack more power.
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Edit Log: | Date | Information | | 2017-10-15 | Added Gains
| | 2017-10-15 | Added Gains + Added Quirk Mastery
| | 2017-10-29 | Made Page More Sexxy
| | 2017-11-01 | Added gains
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| | 2017-12-27 | Added gains
| | 2017-12-28 | Added gains
| | 2018-01-02 | Added gains
| | 2018-01-07 | New Techs
| | 2018-01-10 | Added gains
| | 2018-04-28 | Added gains x 3
| | 2018-05-02 | Added gains
| | 2018-05-05 | Added EP
| | 2018-05-22 | Added gains
| | 2018-05-24 | Added EP and removed old ones
| | 2018-05-30 | Added gains
| | 2018-05-31 | Added gains
| | 2018-06-10 | Added gains
| | 2018-06-27 | Added EP
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Edited by Van, Jul 9 2018, 11:44 PM.
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Van
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Oct 2 2017, 03:13 AM
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Van Characters name: B. Rainer
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A Bottle of White Lotus
Description: Some fine sake reserved for serving to the princes of Yakuza. (though cheapest kind of it.) Some say it goes very well with pork, though it might have seen better days. Can be drank to recover 5 LP, or can be ignited to create a small d-rank explosion. This item is single use.
Tier of material: D
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| The Goods Description: No one's sure how these Death Cap-like mushrooms formed from Hoshi, but for 3 posts they're a powerful trip! Mushrooms have to be consciously consumed to work. Effect cannot, under any circumstances, be forced on another player.
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The Hand of Leviathan Description: A glove formed from a special fabric akin to carbon fibre, possessing increased durability in order to protect Rainer's hands when he punches. The fabric's special makeup allows it to stretch and grow in size, even when Rainer transforms and causes his hands to grow or extend. To top it off, the glove has small metal modules attached to the back which can generate and release electricity for use. Price: 17.6K Material Rank: B Effect Rank: 2 C Rank Effects
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| Leviathan's Coil Description: A simple belt made from a resilient leather. It closes with a sleek clamp, which has a circular crest embedded on its front. The crest has Rainer's initials on it, and is able to store smoke within it for later use. This crest can store up to 15LP and release the smoke for Rainer to merge with when transforming; lightening the load from himself. This crest's fill resets at the start of each thread and can be refilled over the course of a thread by Rainer paying smoke into it. Price: 14.7k Material Rank: C Effect Rank: C
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Edited by Van, Jul 5 2018, 03:41 PM.
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Prophet Misfit
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Oct 2 2017, 03:55 AM
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The last technique is fine, but you forgot to add the TP Cost, which is 5.
*As for the other two, those are a no go, especially the second one.
At D-Rank, a person's ability with their quirk is a beginner, basically.
Similar to clone quirks, if you are going to be creating techniques such as this, they will have to be a letter grade lower than your control rank.
At D-Rank, the most you can make is around 3 smoke clones, which are very weak and will be used as a distraction more than anything else.
One would be capable of moving and using to fight, but they are also still E-Rank, which is really weak. They'll get stronger the more your control rank goes up.
So change them, please.
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Van
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Oct 2 2017, 04:18 AM
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Changed my smoke buddies to mooks who can steal me some donuts, and added TP cost for smoke punch. Also added a ranged blast of smoke.
Edited by Van, Oct 2 2017, 11:12 PM.
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Oct 3 2017, 09:33 PM
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I would say mentions of Quirklessness aren't allowed, but considering the Quirk, yeah I guess it works.
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Oct 3 2017, 10:24 PM
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