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JPThunda
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Sep 13 2017, 05:06 AM
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Here's my first attempt at designing a quirk. Initially I wanted this quirk to be called 'Shadowfrost' and also include ice manipulation & control, but that felt like it was too close to a Double Whammy/Half-Cold Half-Hot type of thing, so I left it out, but I feel like this Quirk is still cool/strong enough to stand on its own. I'm open to constructive criticism and eager for feedback. I didn't see any Quirks on the approved list that were quite like this one, since this doesn't really have anything to do with teleportation and is a kind-of phasing power, sorry if I missed it though!
Shadow Walk | Ability: - The user was born with ties to an alternate plane of existence, a mirrored world of cold and darkness not too unlike our own, with a black sun that radiates cold and casts shadow instead of light. This gives the user of this quirk a number of distinct traits inherent of that world.
This quirk gives the user a 50% natural resistance to cold-based attacks due to their body having partially adapted to the natural cold of the shadow world. Users of this quirk will always have bright blue eyes.
Shadow Walk: The quirk user is able to transition into the shadow world for a brief period of time. The length of time the user can remain in the Shadow World is dependent upon their control rank as follows (although they can always leave earlier):
Rank D - 5 Seconds Rank C - 10 Seconds Rank B - 15 Seconds Rank A - 30 Seconds Rank S - 60 Seconds
While Shadow Walking, the user appears as a transparent, foggy image of themselves, but is otherwise visible. They cannot interact with anything in the normal world, nor can they be physically interacted with, simply passing through the user. While Shadow Walking they likewise perceive people as shadowy, wispy images.
Limitations: - The user cannot stop Shadow Walking while they are 'inside' another person's space and vice versa. The user cannot Shadow Walk with another living being and cannot permanently leave items in the shadow world--if an item is dropped it will instantly return to the normal world. The user can only Shadow Walk with himself and what he can normally carry. The user can only Shadow Walk once every other post until A+ Rank, then once per post. Breaking the limits causes the user to suffer a -4 stats in Stamina. If the user breaks the limit to go beyond the duration that they may Shadow Walk they also suffer a -2 stats to Speed due to the extreme cold of the shadow world, and they may suffer hypothermia or frostbite after extended durations in the Shadow World.
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DrPancakeMD
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Sep 13 2017, 06:04 PM
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Alternate universe/plane Quirks are disallowed, I apologize. Please keep in mind that, while fantastical, Quirks are meant to be biological in their core nature.

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